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Post by gamedave on Nov 11, 2007 23:18:50 GMT -5
THE QUESTION Victor Sage
HP: 2
Calling: Detective
Traits: Origin - Gizmo (0), Tough as Nails (75)
Flaws: Unbalanced - obsessed with conspiracy theories
Abilities: Detective 9 (M - 130) *Conspiracy Theory 9 (N - 60) Disguise 13 (N - 105) Driving 7 (N - 45) Martial Artist 7 (M - 90)
CP: 505
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Post by darthorn on Nov 12, 2007 18:46:53 GMT -5
the questions one of my favert heros thanks for makeing him a write up
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Post by bill909 on Nov 13, 2007 5:06:50 GMT -5
That last sentence has seven mistakes. Who can point them all out?
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Post by Moose Jockey on Dec 2, 2007 11:12:38 GMT -5
Loss of puncuation and tons of misspells.
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Post by gamedave on Dec 2, 2007 13:49:43 GMT -5
Loss of puncuation and tons of misspells. Your reply used poor grammar. Moreover, in a post criticizing someone else's misspellings, you actually managed to misspell "punctuation." I believe you mean: " That sentence had a loss of punctuation and tons of misspellings." The above is still not very clear. Perhaps you meant: "Darthorn's post lacked punctuation, and many words were misspelled."
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